Monday, October 23, 2006

The Parting shot

Beautiful evenings beside the lake

seemed like Heaven which god forsake

bitter memories clad in dreams of a better tommorow

times when life seems a unbearable foe

is it all worth it?

is this where i really fit?

self doubt...self doubt...

life seems to be heading stratight south

no harvest without the rains

they say no pain no gain

fine I say..............

I ask Is it a price You really want to pay?

Mebbe I lost the appetite to fight

Mebbe when the storms came I refused to hold tight..

Sometimes it seems so easy to end this self inflicted wound

that last trigger... ,my escape boat from this misery island marooned.

2 Comments:

Blogger zubin said...

First comment on yout blog..this is one of the best poems I;ve ever read. Great work.

11/26/2006 1:12 AM  
Blogger Viral Doshi said...

hmm.. you have a mysterious style of writing too :-) Your writings also surface a kind of quest which is withing you man ...i like it ..keep it up ..

5/16/2007 7:34 AM  

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